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December 16th, 2014, 5:10 pm

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miyuli,

December 16th, 2014, 5:10 pm

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Ink knows exactly where he's going! Totally!

Please note that I really try to avoid the 'talking to oneself' phenomenon. Is that good or is something missing? What do you guys think?

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Raspberl,

December 16th, 2014, 5:15 pm

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Depends on the character, and characters talking to themselves is not necessarily a bad story telling cheat as long as its not overdone or too obvious.
However, you certainly don't need any dialogue on this page. Your artwork alone captures what he is thinking perfectly.

Katerang,

December 16th, 2014, 6:36 pm

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This is perfect! I love it when characters capture their emotion on their face rather than in their head. and you did it so perfectly here.
LOVE IT!

Mohenjo Daro,

December 17th, 2014, 4:51 am

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As said, it depends on the character, if I made a character something like me, they'd mainly talk to them self but if I made one like Ink, I don't think I'd be having them talking to them self.
I think you did this perfectly! I just love this comic!

GabrielsThoughts,

December 17th, 2014, 10:49 am

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@miyuli:

Wow! Hard to believe there are only four chapters. Good Job!

Andrea (Guest),

December 18th, 2014, 7:24 am

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Wow ink looks so sweet but so scared!

Also, talking to yourself as a character is fine(inner dialogue) as long as you're not overdoing it...I often have my OCs talk to themselves, kind of...

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